How to write a homepage that brings in clients

Your website is supposed to work for you 24/7. But if you’re still explaining to every prospect why they should choose you, your homepage isn’t doing its job.

An effective homepage makes visitors want to become clients. Not just browse. Not just bookmark for later. Actually take action.

Here’s how to build one:

How to write a homepage that brings in clients

Why your current homepage isn’t converting visitors into clients

You might have a beautiful page, but pretty design doesn’t always equal effectiveness. Here’s what’s harming your conversions:

  • You talk about yourself instead of talking about your clients. Your visitors don’t care about your passion for your job… They want to know if you can solve their problem.
  • Your message lacks clarity. In 3 to 5 seconds, a visitor must understand what you do and why it will be useful to them. If they have to search to understand, they’re already gone.
  • You don’t guide your visitors. A page without clear direction is like a map without street names. People look and leave.

Structure of an Effective Homepage: 6 Essential Sections

Here’s an idea of the main sections, in the big lines.

Your header must answer THE question your visitors have: “Am I in the right place?”

What works:

  • A title that names the problem you solve
  • A subtitle that specifies for whom
  • A clear and visible action button

Example for a lawyer: “Complicated divorce? Protect your interests and those of your children” “Personalized legal support for parents going through separation”

No jargon. Your prospects want to have an idea of what their life will be like once you’ve helped them solve their problem. Technical vocabulary doesn’t impress, it bores.

The formula that works:

  • The problem you solve
  • How you solve it
  • The result they get

Testimonials aren’t optional, they’re a must! They’re a weapon against your prospects’ silent objections. They build trust and show your expertise and experience.

Place them strategically:

  • After presenting your solution
  • With photo, name (if your clients agree) and concrete result
  • Focus on transformation (not on “you’re amazing”)

This section answers: “Why him/her rather than another?

Don’t list your diplomas. Instead show:

  • Your unique approach
  • Your clients’ results
  • What really differentiates you (your personality included!)

Of course, the goal is that your prospects become clients.

You know how sometimes at the cheese counter, you get to taste samples to make you want to buy?

Well, you can create a free resource for the same purpose: show your vibe, your style and give a taste of what working with you looks like.

Cherry on top: you build your subscriber list. Prospects who download your free resource are already interested in your services and motivated to solve their problem.

They’re generally serious prospects (if you build your free resource strategically and intentionally so that it selects serious prospects).

Then, you just need to program email sequences designed to show them the results they can get, showing the next step to follow. This system works for you 24/7.

Each call to action should entice, not intimidate or confuse.

Instead of a “Contact us” button, opt for:

  • “Let’s talk about your project”
  • “Book your free assessment”
  • “Discover how to attract more clients”
Write an About Me page that stands out and builds trust

The Mistakes That Kill Your Conversions

“We are”, “My expertise”, “My values”… Stop. Your visitors don’t care about this, at least not in these terms!

They’re looking for a solution to THEIR problem.

Replace:

  • “We are experts in…” → “You get…”
  • “My mission” → “Your results”
  • “My services” → “What it changes for you”

Your copy should always have more “you” than “I”.

Plus, there’s no worse title than “my services” for SEO. No one looking for a vet or coach will search for “veterinarian services” or “coach services”. Keyword-wise, it’s zero.

You want to say everything at once to make sure your visitors grasp the full scope of what you do.

That’s how you end up shooting yourself in the foot. Nobody remembers anything.

An effective homepage must be strategic and filter. It must attract your ideal clients and repel others.

Each visitor arrives with a different level of awareness and tolerance for their problem. Some are ready to buy now, others are just realizing the nature of their problem and starting to research possible solutions.

Offer multiple paths:

  • For those who are ready: direct contact
  • For the undecided: free resource
  • For the curious: educational content
Create a homepage that converts

Technical Optimization of Your Homepage

A page that takes more than 3 seconds to load loses 40% of its visitors. Optimize:

  • Your images (WebP format if your website accepts it, otherwise opt for png format and reduce its size on https://tinyjpg.com)
  • Your hosting plan (I recommend Hostinger – affiliate link, we both earn when you use my link: you get a discount and I get a commission)
  • Your unnecessary plugins (if you’re on WordPress)
  • Avoid unnecessary JavaScript, as it weighs quite heavy and can slow loading time down.

More than 60% of your visitors browse from their smartphone. If your page isn’t perfect on smartphone, you lose potential clients.

Make sure all your sections are within frame, that your images are as light as possible (as seen above) and that your font is large enough to be readable (recommended size 16px-18px).

Naturally integrate the terms your clients type into Google

  • Your titles
  • Your content
  • Your image (alt tags + image title = fields used by the audio description for visually impaired readers)
  • Metadata (you’ll see a field called “meta title” and “meta description”)

If you want to know how to choose your keywords, you’ll find all the info in this article: How to choose your keywords for SEO with free tools.

How to choose keywords for SEO with free tools

How to Test and Improve Your Homepage

Show your page to someone who doesn’t know your business. In 5 seconds, they should be able to say:

  • What you do
  • For whom
  • Why choose you
  • Monitor (in Google Search Console or on your site):
  • Time spent on page
  • Bounce rate
  • Clicks on your buttons
  • Conversions (forms, calls)

Your homepage is never finished (so to speak, although it works for you 24/7). Test:

  • Different titles
  • Multiple CTAs
  • The order of your sections
  • Update your testimonials

Concrete Examples by Sector

  • Title: “Calm your anxiety and regain balance without taking medicines for years”
  • Focus: Quick results, personalized approach
  • Call to action button: “Book your discovery consultation”
  • Title: “No more sleepless nights managing your accounts when tax season comes”
  • Focus: Peace of mind, tax optimization
  • Call to action button: “Calculate your tax savings”
  • Title: “Go from survival to success in 90 days”
  • Focus: Concrete transformation, precise timeframe
  • Call to action button: “Discover your personalized plan”

Your 5-Step Action Plan for a Homepage That Brings Clients

  • Audit your current page with the 5-second test
  • Identify your clients’ 3 main problems
  • Rewrite your title with a clear benefit
  • Add 2 or 3 strategic testimonials
  • Test and measure results

To summarize…

An effective homepage isn’t the most beautiful or most original. It’s the one that speaks your clients’ language and naturally guides them to take action.

Your expertise has value. Your homepage must show it as soon as visitors land on it.

Because in a world where attention is measured in seconds, every word counts.

Book a Strategy & Visibility session. One hour together to fix your homepage (or any page killing your conversions) and clarify your marketing message so the right people actually buy.

No more explaining your value on every call. No more price shoppers wasting your time.

Just qualified clients ready to pay for your expertise.

Book your session now

Your turn,
Morgane

A website Google can find and words that sell your offers like hot croissants

FAQ: About Your Homepage

Ask your last 3 clients for feedback. Specifically, ask them what problem they had before working with you, what changed after, and what they’d tell someone considering your services.

If you’re just starting out, offer a few discovery sessions or reduced-rate services in exchange for detailed testimonials. Make it clear you’re building your portfolio and need their honest feedback.

You can also beta test your services. Something real beats nothing every time.

Ask them. Seriously. Send an email to your past clients asking: “What was keeping you up at night before we worked together?” Their exact words become your homepage copy.

Look at the questions people ask during discovery calls. Check your inbox for common themes. Scroll through comments on posts in your industry.

Your clients are already telling you their problems. You just need to listen and write it down.

You can also use AI and do a market research.

Yes. And you should.

Your prospects aren’t Googling technical terms. They’re Googling their problem in plain language. “My dog won’t stop barking at visitors” not “canine behavioral modification for territorial aggression.”

Use simple language to hook them, then show your expertise through results and how you solve things. Save the technical stuff for when they’re already convinced you know what you’re doing.

Traffic without conversions means your message isn’t clear or your offer isn’t compelling enough.

Check: Are you talking about their problem or your process? Are your calls to action obvious? Do your testimonials show real transformation? Is your offer actually what they need right now?

Sometimes the problem isn’t the homepage structure. It’s that you’re attracting the wrong people or your offer doesn’t match what they’re searching for.

Depends on your traffic. If you’re already getting visitors, you might see changes within a few weeks. More time on page, more clicks on your CTAs, better quality inquiries.

If you’re starting from zero traffic, you need some time (from 2 weeks to 3-6 months minimum) before Google starts sending people your way.

But here’s what happens immediately: the prospects who DO land on your page will have a clearer path to becoming clients. That’s worth it even if the numbers take time to climb.

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